Age/Gender: 16, Female
Location: The Alter Of Naught
Job: Student / Musician
Save a dinosaur, ride a paleontologist.
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Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 510 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 65,767
Voting Pow.: 4.95 votes
BBS Posts: 83 (0.09 per day)
Flash Reviews: 25
Music Reviews: 10
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
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25 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
If I were to make one suggestion on this game to make it better, it would be to add sound. And probably find a way to upgrade the controls instead of just press z and x the whole time. But good job :]
Author's Response:
Yeah, I agree, but something keeps going wrong with the sound. It for some reason jumbles up the action script, causing an error, sorry! Anyway, you can press space to jump you know.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Haha! This flash made me laugh a lot! It's great, original and well, funny. I like the guitar music. It's not the best I've heard, and it doesn't sound too serious but that's why I think it's great. :) It sounds like a couple of guys just playing around, haha, I love it. Keep making more awesome flashes!
Favorite :]
Author's Response:
The guitar was played by Ben and your right, we were just messing around. I need to try and get Ben to play some more guitar for my later movies. Thanks for the Fave.
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Nice flash. Although I would suggest using more music in it towards the beginning because while watching it, it got kind of boring. Also, I just saw moments when music would've greatly enhanced your flash and dramaticized that moment to make it really good. =]
Author's Response:
Thanks! yeah, I couldn't think of what music would work. Not only that, but I'd have to time it with the whole movie and everything, which is a pain. But I get your point. Thanks for reviewing!
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As a suggestion, I would've tried making the volume on the song and sounds louder, except the gunshot (That was a good volume). All in all I really like your style and I only wished you could've made it longer and perhaps showed some more "rough-hell-city" scenery in there. But I thought it was a great flash :]
Author's Response:
The background, yeah I cannot draw architecture so good so the surroundings will mostly be grey or black like sin city books.
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Your abilities in making flash videos has so much potential. I'm referring to use of song with animation. Like when Jesus is "playing the guitar", using that kind of artistry for perhaps a different kind of flash would be good.. Think about trying to make a serious flash. I think you might succeed.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I mainly wanted to make this for my new comic as more or less of a test. I plan to do an animated series for the comic soon you see so that was more or less a proof of concept.
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